Thread:DannyMan98/@comment-1197011-20200407014724

I don't know why I keep talking to you, since you don't answer, but I get the feeling that you're making an effort to improve, so I'll keep trying this for a bit.

First: you're still writing from a real-world perspective instead of an in-universe perspective. For example: "By the flashback portion of the Omniverse episode "Malfactor", the Psycholeoterrans have become a rare and endangered species".

You see? This is the kind of information that should be either rephrased (e.g.: "At one point, the Psycholeopterrans became a rare and endangered species", or something along these lines), or moved to the "Notes" section. Every time you mention an episode or the name of a person associated with the series or whatever, you're writing from a real-world perspective.

Second: physiology doesn't mean what you think it means. Most people make this same mistake, for some reason, but "physiology" is not physical appearance, it is the chemical workings of the body. Information about a species' physical appearance should be described under the "Biology" section outside of any subsection, or, if you absolutely must create a subsection for it, name it as "anatomy" or "morphology", rather than "physiology".

I'll also tell you this: you don't need to rewrite all those pages. I'm not asking you to rewrite dozens of pages in order to correct those mistakes unless you really want to. I do plan to clean-up the Ben 10 pages when I have time. All I'm asking is that, from now on, you stop making these mistakes and follow ASW:Rules and Policies. 